Writing - Week 6 Day 2

Today students prepared their second draft and HANDED IT IN with the first draft (not the flashdraft from the notebook, but the one we wrote on looseleaf paper two weeks ago).

This draft should have included 1) what the story is "really" about (since that was part of the first draft two weeks ago, 2) a new introduction from one of the strategies you tried last week, 3) a moment with split second writing, and 4) an example of magnified eye.

There should be a difference between the first draft and the second draft.